How to build this paragraph:
- Start with one sentence saying what the child saw — the free, happy side.
- Take the three workers one by one. For each, name one hard thing and one dull thing.
- Think about the body (tired legs, sun, rain, no sleep) and about money (a day with no sale).
- End with one sentence saying that the work is still worth respect. Do not end by saying the child was silly — his wish was a real one.
Sample answer:
The hawker walks from street to street for hours with a heavy load of bangles on his head. His legs ache, and he must call out again and again in the heat until his throat is dry. Some days nobody buys, and then he has walked all day for very little. He cannot stop when he is tired, because he earns only when he sells.
The gardener does what he likes with his spade, but digging is hard work. His back and shoulders hurt by the afternoon. He works in the burning sun of May and in the rain of July, and the dust he gets on his clothes has to be washed off by somebody at the end of the day. Watering and weeding must be done again the next morning, and the morning after that — the same work, over and over.
The watchman stays awake all night while the whole lane sleeps. Night after night he walks up and down the same street, and there is very little to see. It is cold in winter and lonely always, and he must sleep in the daytime, when children are playing and shops are open. If anything goes wrong in the lane, it is he who must face it first.
So the child’s wish is a lovely one, but it is only half the picture. These are three real jobs, done by three people who work hard and are needed. That is worth knowing, and worth respecting.